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Because stones guarantee,
"Sinners bleed red."
#SixWordStories Theme Prompt: Sin.

"So when they continued asking Him, He stood and said, 'He who is without sin amongst you, may cast the first stone at her.'"

-John 8:7

I hope this conveys the proper message. I'm brand new at six-word stories, and the theme is particularly challenging for me to embody with such a limit. ^^; Any criticism is warmly welcomed.
Bullet; Red  Is the meaning clear?
Bullet; Red  Does the flow seemed forced?
Bullet; Red  Is the word choice appropriate? What suggestions would you substitute?
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FallenAngelKokoro Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats deep owo

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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks. =3=
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FallenAngelKokoro Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np ;3
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