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starstuck in heaven's ocean
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moonstruck-child wanders, wondering
'neath an ocean of vacuum space,
suppose the stars sing?
and the brilliant lights
drew her mind on a string,
arcing above, beyond, and
farther.
the ground was a curve,
minute humanity declaring
its desire to create stars
in glittering cities, festivals.
earthless-child gasped without breath
as her house could have fit
on her littlest finger.
oceans of sky frosted over,
as the sun took his leave
for Earth's other-side
and then,
and then...
star-bound child was listening
her stars were singing in soft
blinding melodies connecting,
an orchestra of silver light-breaks-the-dark.
songs we aren't wise enough to hear,
music that might break a heart,
or heal one.
back-to-earth girl
wanders no more;
she's turned her thoughts
from space to shore,
but still wonders,
if our planet is a star
in someone else's sky,
what sort of song have we
been singing?
'neath an ocean of vacuum space,
suppose the stars sing?
and the brilliant lights
drew her mind on a string,
arcing above, beyond, and
farther.
the ground was a curve,
minute humanity declaring
its desire to create stars
in glittering cities, festivals.
earthless-child gasped without breath
as her house could have fit
on her littlest finger.
oceans of sky frosted over,
as the sun took his leave
for Earth's other-side
and then,
and then...
star-bound child was listening
her stars were singing in soft
blinding melodies connecting,
an orchestra of silver light-breaks-the-dark.
songs we aren't wise enough to hear,
music that might break a heart,
or heal one.
back-to-earth girl
wanders no more;
she's turned her thoughts
from space to shore,
but still wonders,
if our planet is a star
in someone else's sky,
what sort of song have we
been singing?
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.__. This was too ambitious of me, fitting two prompts into one poem.
Entry for Khaimin's contest.
Is the comparing of space to an ocean too far-fetched? Does it make the poem too muddled?
Is the concept just too weird to work with at all? It sort of popped into my head one night in Tokyo...I was on a travel-high back then.
If you find anything else off, please feel free to share! 
Entry for Khaimin's contest.
Is the comparing of space to an ocean too far-fetched? Does it make the poem too muddled? Is the concept just too weird to work with at all? It sort of popped into my head one night in Tokyo...I was on a travel-high back then. If you find anything else off, please feel free to share! © 2014 - 2024 Tales-of-Tao
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this sounds so awesome >w< good luck in the contest hun! <333