literature

this doesn't deserve a title

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Published: Jan 11, 2014

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Literature Text

you're partial to apathy,
and active effort suits you ill
but i still see the starch-edged
nurse reminding humans that
humanity is medicine and more
like a briefly shared touch, that
"you'll be okay"
words haven't the time to
convey.

darling,

you can't lie to me.

I have the worst combination of writer's block and a headache, so I'm almost ashamed to put this up. It's what I scribbled in my

journal for day 10. Hjfjsfasjlfhasl.

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0hgravity

Jan 11, 2014

ah, this isn't so bad at all. you shouldn't be ashamed. writer's block is a difficult to thing to work through. I'm feeling it pretty badly myself.

I think this began very well (I really liked that second line) but I got a bit confused toward the end and realized I'm not really sure what it is about.